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Dream of a world
Where all are united;
Everyone shares,
And there’s nothing one-sided.

Dream of a world
Where there’s money for all,
Where the smallest are big
And the biggest are small.

Dream of a world
Where all races are one;
Where there’s no black or white,
No harm can be done.

Dream of a world
Where no one fears death;
Nobody worries;
No tears are wept.

Imagine that world.
And how does it seem?
To me it seems perfect;
It’s everyone’s dream.

Imagine that world,
But forget it as fast,
For a dream is a dream;
Once we wake, the dream’s past…
©2004-2009 ~hinner
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i usually don't write rhyming or metered poetry... until now... tell me what you think

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:iconattack-kitten:
Somehow this makes me think of the ddr song dream a dream
:iconhinner:
lol.. i didn't even think of that until now... teehee!

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all evidence has been burried
all tapes have been erased
but your footsteps give you away
:iconblacktearsofapril:
I like it, It's very sturctured and to-the point, and it has a really solid and maningfull ending. ^-^
:icondemonface:
*nods*

very deep, jefferina. i'm impressed. it's a very simple meter, very simple wording... but it fits somehow, the simplicity of the dialogue in comparison to the depth of the idea you're getting across... i like it. i like it very much. :+fav:
:iconhinner:
hehe :giggle: thanks so much :)

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all evidence has been burried
all tapes have been erased
but your footsteps give you away
:iconhinner:
ohmygosh, ohmygosh!! a poem +faved by nora! :D i'm deeply honored! :D

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all evidence has been burried
all tapes have been erased
but your footsteps give you away
:icononlinegamer16:
Very very nicely written Reffers. I love the idea behind it and it flows very well. You should write more rhyming poetry. :)

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Everyone is equal;
however, I am more equal than others....
:iconhinner:
teehee! i don't generally like reading or writing rhymed or metered poetry for some reason... but sometimes i'm in the mood for it :) teehee, i'll attempt more in the future, i'm sure

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all evidence has been burried
all tapes have been erased
but your footsteps give you away
:icononlinegamer16:
That's good. I hope you do. :)

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Everyone is equal;
however, I am more equal than others....

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